I’m not really sure how I felt about this story, while it had a lot of potential, I was distracted, by the style of speech the author used, the characters flip flopped back and forth from modern day speech to speech that reflected an earlier century, being a short story coming in at around 60 pages the author would have done well sticking with one or the other. I enjoyed the overall concept of the story it had great bones, but I felt it was rushed at the end, I think it would translate better by making it a touch longer, you have an epic battle that is glossed over and I was left wanting a better resolution. With that said I’m not a huge fan of short stories/Novellas as I always end up wanting more out of it in end.
I gave this book a 3 out of 5 star rating
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I was gifted a epub version of this book from smaswords.com in exchange for an honest unbiased review by the author.